Need a critique of my work

This may not apply to anyone else, but I am really struggling to get
started selling my jewelry. Local people seem to like it, but when I
went on two of the sale internet sites, I can’t seem to get
anywhere. The metals group on one site just turned me down, and I
feel very bad about this. I know I am a beginner, and could use any
advise about my work. I know my website is very amateurish, and I’m
working on doing something about that very shortly. I would love to
receive an feedback you could give me. I appreciate your time and
help. Thank you.

Catherine Thomas-Kemp

Catherine-- how do we find your website?

Elegant Insects Jewelry